Comments on: Design Makeover: More Than Just a Business

By: mike

mike — Wed, 28 Jul 2010 02:28:05 +0000

add a “kicker” line above “THE SMELL-GOOD, ON TIME”

By: Euklid

Euklid — Fri, 29 May 2009 11:44:14 +0000

#1. Best design. Simplicity prevails.

#2. Best icon. The cross in #1 is nice too, but I think the blue white color scheme of #2 is simpler, more balanced.

#3. Best font – APOSTLE definitely needs a Roman feel to it. Although, this particular Roman lacks balance. There are better options.

My suggestion – combine elements #2 and #3, and have designer #1 put it together

By: loswl

loswl — Tue, 24 Mar 2009 20:55:37 +0000

#1 I like this logo the best because of its simplicity and clean design and the structure of the cross in the “O” I would recommend placing the logo to the top left on the card and moving the graphic swirls to the right and maybe changing the font for the name to one that is not so close to the font used in the Logo…the Logo needs to stand out more on the card.

#3 I love this one too, my second choice, but I don’t think the winged lion is a christian symbol, it is more a mythical figure, but it is strong, I love the layout of the business card.

By: Steve Rose

Steve Rose — Mon, 23 Mar 2009 20:53:58 +0000

I thought the original version did not indicate strongly enough that the commercial roofing was just a division of the company. Initial impression was that the company did commercial roofing only.

I think the third version is by far the most professional, including resolving the above problem. However, that horizontal rule has an unfortunate point of origin.

By: Heather

Heather — Mon, 23 Mar 2009 20:53:42 +0000

I vote for the first one, Jeff Cook